17年10月英语学习随笔(一)
Oct 1,I received message that my daughter will go home as they finished the sport meeting .I went school at half past ten .There are so many parents which waiting for their children .Later ,I saw my daughter came here but she didn't see me .I shot at her .and drug her box .I took her with my elective bike.Cars are so many they are full of the road. When we get home, It is half past twelve .Daughter told me that she had the No.38 from 40 runner .Afternoon ,daughter went to sleep and required me to wake up her for she sleeping ahour later. A hour later ,I wanted to wake up her ,but she didnt get up wharever I wake her . I get angery and shouted her ,"Can you stop sleeping now ? You have sleep for long !" Daughter moved a little and said :"Are you my mother ?I only sleep for a monment , but you shout for long …"
指出一点点问题。过去式有些漏掉啦。不过看得出来宝妈很努力。加油
有点小错误 但是已经相当相当相当赞了! 这种 日记形式 非常锻炼写作 加油哦 !